Monday, 2 December 2013

Character portrait


Character writing WALT: Describe (Show not tell).


Dark brown, short, shiny hair glowing in the sun. Slightly wrinkled but beautiful elegant hands typing on her laptop. Long talented legs skating on the ground toward success. Hazel green eyes shining like stars.  


Low husky voice cheering me on as I am coming up the finish line. Her responsible and organized brain is always switched on. Her name is Jacqui and she is one of the most talented people that I have met. She is always positive and happy but you don’t want to muck around… or else!


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